Thread:Fliaqx/@comment-35274161-20200223150418

let's use cook-off as an example. you added a lot of unnecessary filler text. you went from "Cook Off' is a single-day heist in Notoriety. The crew is instructed to cook and secure Bloxy Cola inside a protected house." to "Cook Off is a one day heist where the crew or just yourself heads to a house near some sort of forest, the police already knows you are there so the mission goes instantly loud. The crew needs to clear out the house and get to work.". you can see that there is a lot of text that's really nothing but words and adds nothing to the sentence. rule of thumb: longer =/= better 